Story board
Working titles:
Forest Queen /
"The The Seed and the forest Princess"
1.Island forest
2.Falling into the forest below
3.The seed grows into the tree
4.The tree /the prsion
5.Walking throught the dark woods
6.High above the water fall of the lake
7.Swiming through the waters
8.Transformed by the waters of the lake.
9.Standing by the lake transformed and free.
10.Grows her wings to fly
11.Flys up into the sky
12.The seed returned to forest below to grow once more.
pipe line film
Pipe-line film Showing a pictorial view of my working pipe-line
from Mud box to Maya to After Effects to Final cut pro
and compression for DVD, Blog and Youtube.
pipe line After Effects
Pipe line/ After Effects /importing postion and scale/lighting and picture distortion.
Concept art
Concept art is a form of illustration where the main goal is to convey a visual representation of a design, idea, and/or mood for use in films,animations before it is put into the final product.
Concept art is also referred to as visual development
"LOST" scene / the dance
James Isaac :L6
its a good animation, the changes between the tree girl and second girl is dramatic, when girl walks up to tree at first, fantastic imagery, once diving into water, the fluidity is blocky, overall the story and narration is good, visually appealing with nice touches in background with sun rays, shadows.
L5 : Steven Clarke
Firstly : The Narrative is good, I tried watching it without the sound and didn't really get the story, so it's quite helpful there.
Answer : If I could live without the voice over I would still not sure it works, need the right voice... soon.
Secondly: The camera shot makes the seed lasts a little too long on the fall... it makes it look really slow.
Answer: Incresed the seed of the falling seed looks better thanks.
On 0:42/0:43 it just seems to dissolve into the grass not really burry itself properly. Try changing camera angle and holding it a bit longer.
Answer : Dissolve is good! its a magic seed!
Thirdly: You walk cycle is a little stiff- the arms seem a major problem, if you reference the Ents from the Lord of The Rings, you'll see that although they are trees, the still move the arms properly (it just makes her look a bit stiff)(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sweh2EekM4M).
Answer : Moved her arms in and yes that helped thanks.
Fourthly: 3:37 When she is rising from the water (look at Angelina Jolie rise from Beowulf (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uS07sfiurno)).: Answer : I like that film
Fifthly: 5:01min Her swimming is a little bit like the walk where her arms don't come closer to her body, making it look un-natural. (Here's a reference that may help: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-X9Zim9jOCI)
Answer : We must swim differently!...No moved her arms in abit and the action became something not what I wanted. She is a Tree so not Human, yet.
Sixthly: When the wings appear it looks good, but as they grow they dominate the screen and it might be me, yet seem to slightly Pixelate.
Answer : no the were wings built in MudBox with a strong yellow texture to give it that shimming look!
Lastly: I love the combination of the 3D and the film, it just adds some amazing depth and the scenery is amazing so Kudos on that.
water girls before and after two versions of the same scene
Water girls 1. & 2.before and after.
Two versions of the same scene.
Second film. Improved colour and body position with added
shadows from trees.
Having placed figure in pipe-line I need to update to reposition arms to new improved position.
1.
Very beautiful Martin and a wonderful idea. Spirituality mingled with nature and balance. Great work.
Good colouring and understanding of the shades and hues at different times of day.
I think maybe some bubbles should be added to the swimming part. Just to make it look more real. It's really stunning.
You sure you want a cockney with a speech impediment narrating it? Your beautiful imagery needs a female voice - but that's just my opinion.
Excellent work Martin!
Bella.
2.
Thats so kewl I love the colour in the differnt scenes really sets the mood, where did you film the real parts?, the character are looking great too. I think the poems really well written and the voice fit with the mood like a glove. thanks for sharing, thanks Fay :-)
Very beautiful Martin and a wonderful idea. Spirituality mingled with nature and balance. Great work.
Good colouring and understanding of the shades and hues at different times of day.
I think maybe some bubbles should be added to the swimming part. Just to make it look more real. It's really stunning.
You sure you want a cockney with a speech impediment narrating it? Your beautiful imagery needs a female voice - but that's just my opinion.
Excellent work Martin!
Bella.
2.
Thats so kewl I love the colour in the differnt scenes really sets the mood, where did you film the real parts?, the character are looking great too. I think the poems really well written and the voice fit with the mood like a glove. thanks for sharing, thanks Fay :-)
forest princess models two before and after
Forest princess Two models
before and after
Wire frame / tin foil / clay
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